toki
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Post by toki on Nov 23, 2008 21:10:00 GMT -5
New character! say a big happy hello to ARES! Name:Toki Species:gray Wolf Gender: Female Age: 4 weeks Description: small, looks almost like a husky, (ignore the pic's eyes. she really has green eyes) Personality:Adventurous,Curious, Timid, but wants to be brave. (gets agressive when pushed around or treated cruely to) Very mature for her age History: Toki was born from a pack of mean wolves, exept for her mother. The alpha,who was the nastiest of all did not want Toki and her littermates part of the pack. Toki's mother fought for her pups, but lost. Instead of killing the pups himself, he threw them into a forest far way from the pack. Are her siblings still alive? Is her mother still alive? Will she ever see that nasty wolf again? You cannot name all the unawnsered questions Toki has. Pack: Ziira, soul, dennis, sabbath, Gabriel, Denegrad... I think.... Relations: N/A Name: Ares (Air-EES) Species: Red fox (albino) Gender: male Age: 2 years old Description: Personality: Tough and brave, but his albinism masks his true colors (LOL pun somewhat intended) History: He was born with albinism. he was mostly ignored as a pup and that made him tough, once he was old enough he became a loner...yeah big mistake... i know. He is too easy to spot! Pack: N/A Relations: N/A Name: Nashoba Species: Artic wolf Gender: female Age: Description: Personality: Pack: Relations:
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Post by Breeze on Jan 26, 2009 0:07:34 GMT -5
Welcome to Animatus! Your characters look fine except for one thing: One week is really too young for a wolf puppy to be wandering around on her own -- she wouldn't even have opened her eyes at that point. Would you mind changing that age to at least one to two months? By that point your puppy can walk around. Here is a great resource for wolves and animals in general: animaldiversity.ummz.umich.edu/site/accounts/information/Canis_lupus.html . I highly recommend it. Edit - Oh, and pure wolves don't have pink noses or blue eyes. If she's a hybrid, that's fine, but otherwise, could you please change it? Grey-blue or green-blue eyes are fine; just not pure blue.
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Post by Breeze on Jan 26, 2009 16:42:38 GMT -5
One month is fine, yes, since she's been found by an adult. One week was just a bit much. She wouldn't have even been able to walk, ha. Edit - Yeah, I'm a dummy and put a period at the end of the link. >.>
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Post by Breeze on Jan 26, 2009 16:51:23 GMT -5
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